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Hope you all like it a lot.
I wish to thank for beta reading for me. Thanks so much!
If you can't see the words too well look below
Page 3
Panel 1
Soundwave's thoughts
Our usual spot. Megatron and myself would just sit outside on a ledge. We would sit under the stars and talk about old times or drink until we pass out. I always like doing this. He only invites me.
Panel 2
Soundwave: Thanks again for inviting me for a drink my lord
Megs: Its alright my friend. I like your company and your the only one I trust.
Panel 3:
Soundwave: I'm honored my lord but, there is another reason why I am glad you invited me. I want to tell you something.
Megs: Oh What is that?
Panel 4:
Soundwave: Well...
Our hands are so close, inches from touching .I could feel his touch. My spark suddenly beats hard.
My body feels hot already as my mind starts to wandering. I think about doing things to him. (Dammit! Control yourself). Just tell him. Don't just jump on him.
It's "You're the only one I trust", Not "Your the only one I trust."
It's like you would not write; "Your the best",
the correct way when someone is addressing another
person it's "you're the best."
That's the only thing I hope you would correct
other than that I cannot wait for the next part!
I really think you should publish "gay transformers
falling in love with each" comics, I know they're
out there written in Japanese; it would be
thoughtful if the same kind of transformer
love stories were in English, too.